genetic modification is a branch of science which changes DNA of species and as a consequence, their characteristics will changed. for example this science is used for trees which make them have more benefits. hera are some of the advantages of modified trees. first, this type of trees can resist more in worse conditions such as virus attacts. althogh, genetically modified treescan grow faster and they can have more fruits in comparison with native trees. this can be an economical benefit. a large number of jungles all around the world are ruined because of cutting trees for firewood or building timber. with the use of modified trees, we can increase the speed of tree growth and we can jobran this problem and preserve native trees which are unique or rare species.
althoghthis method has advantages, it has disadvantages too. one of the most pros is resistance in some bad conditions like climate change. as native trees are different from each other, if bad conditions happen they will not respond in the same way and some of them can resist in this condition but modified trees are all same and in this situation all of them will die.
the growth speed of wild trees is less than modified trees and modified trees slow down the growth rate of wild trees which have important variety species. as a conclusion althogh gen modifing is a strong way but it has pros and nons and it should be investigated more before usage.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Genetic
genetic modification is a branch of science whi...
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Suggestion: change
...consequence, their characteristics will changed. for example this science is used for t...
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...ees which make them have more benefits. hera are some of the advantages of modified ...
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Suggestion: is
...hich make them have more benefits. hera are some of the advantages of modified tree...
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...hich make them have more benefits. hera are some of the advantages of modified tree...
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...fruits in comparison with native trees. this can be an economical benefit. a large n...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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... trees for firewood or building timber. with the use of modified trees, we can incre...
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...rees which are unique or rare species. althoghthis method has advantages, it has disadvant...
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...ome bad conditions like climate change. as native trees are different from each ot...
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...s which have important variety species. as a conclusion althogh gen modifing is a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, for example, such as, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 248.0 270.72406181 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78225806452 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55774872964 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 145.348785872 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532258064516 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 419.366225166 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7032955355 49.2860985944 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2307692308 110.228320801 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 21.698381199 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 7.06452816374 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 4.19205298013 429% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.475794500647 0.272083759551 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158002591162 0.0996497079465 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100352174361 0.0662205650399 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30426445577 0.162205337803 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148186593362 0.0443174109184 334% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.2367328918 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 63.6247240618 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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