Nowadays human being is the most eminent resources of every society and it plays a key role in the success of the country. As a result, the training of people is very important and one of the major parts of training corresponds to teachers. Some people think that in the past teachers were so respectful. However, this issue has recently engendered many controversies among the social scientists. While some are adamantly claiming that rearing is not valuable now, many may take the opposite viewpoint. Nevertheless, many factors should be taken into consideration to be able to prove which belief is closer to reality. As far as I’m concerned, I firmly contend that these days mentors have more respect. The following paragraphs will aptly elucidate through three outstanding reasons.
The first noteworthy point to be mentioned in this context is that psychologists find out that abetting children is so worthy and it can have many positive outcomes for the family and society in the future and in this procedure teachers have a vital role. People figure out that teacher have the prominent influence on their child’s future and as a result, they would venerate teachers more. To illustrate this fact, let’s consider the following example. Japan was one of the first countries that understand/ the importance of teachers for the success of society so in this country, people consider teachers more and they have more salary in this country.
Equally important is that teachers ability to communicate correctly with children has a close relationship with the learning of children in the class. It’s completely accepted by all the people that we can understand lectures of kind teachers better. Therefore, having gracious and energetic teachers is not only essential but crucial. To clarify that, I shall take a personal experience as an example. When I was in high school, I had a kind chemistry teacher. I don’t like chemistry at all but I listen to her in the class because I like her. Consequently, people revere teachers more to make them more happy and energetic.
Furthermore, it is an indisputable fact that teachers have a close relationship with the child’s emotions. It’s obvious that a nervous teacher can make students anxious and decrease their happy feeling. A recent study conducted in my country investigates the effect of teacher feeling on students in some random classes in the cities. It indicates that happy teachers play with students more and they can make students feel better about school and life. As you can see there’s great significance in teacher’s emotion on students. Consequently, society members respect teachers more at present to make them feel better.
In brief, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that as the society understand the influential effects of teachers on children and society, they respect teachers more in the present.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: much may; a good deal of may
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, in brief, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2485.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 473.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25369978858 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92127714556 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511627906977 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 765.0 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7112108011 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5769230769 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1923076923 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 5.45110844103 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164381635789 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487814176178 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436968577975 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107616080753 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369167030741 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 86.8835125448 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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