The little ice age was a period that unusually cold tempreture took place in many parts of Earth. There was harsh winter and glaciers grew larger in many areas. The reading passage reviews three of most important causes for this period. However, the lecturer thinks that the idea that presented in the reading passage is outdated.
The reading passage mentions that by melting of glaciers, a large amount of water was sent into Gulf Stream. This huge amount of water causes large ocean current that strongly affects Earth's climate. But the lecturer thinks that little ice age happened in southern hemisphere like New Zeland and South Africa. The ocean current can affect cooling in Europe and North America.
The reading passage mentions that volcanic dust which is the result of eruption can be another reason. Because, these clouds can spread over great areas and block sunlight from reaching Earth's surface. But the lecturer thinks that volcanic eruption has visual effects that must be noticed by people. But there are no reports that prove the possibility of strong volcanic eruption.
Finally, the reading passage thinks that decline in human population increased forest and reduced the amount of carbon dioxide which causes earth to become warmer. But the lecturer thinks that there was not enough time for this reason and also population started to grow in little ice age era.Hence, people needed to grow crops and cut the forest to prepare foods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1373.03311258 89% => OK
No of words: 240.0 270.72406181 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07916666667 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1701534444 2.5805825403 84% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 419.366225166 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7314958534 49.2860985944 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0714285714 110.228320801 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 21.698381199 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 7.06452816374 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377391512915 0.272083759551 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124508096703 0.0996497079465 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878719889974 0.0662205650399 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226558306246 0.162205337803 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502522729136 0.0443174109184 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.3589403974 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.8541721854 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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