TPO 28- Robert E. Peary was a well-known adventurer and arctic explorer who in 1909 set out to reach the North Pole. When he returned from the expedition, he claimed to have reached the pole on April 7, 1909. This report made him into an international celebrity. Though some historians have expressed doubts that Peary did in fact reach the North Pole, three arguments provide strong support for the truth of Peary’s claim.
The reading and the lecture both was about trustworthy of finding north pole by Robert E. Peary the passage claims evidences that shown the story of finding north pole was completely true on the other hand professor explain why these faces cannot be true by explain some reasons.
reading mention that there were some reporters from NAtional Geographic Society with him during his discovery and they approved Robert's claim about his discovery. however, Scientist female says that the reporters were his close friends and their report was not aim and convincing.
Second issue that passage says is that explorer whose name was tom do the exact thing that Robert did in the same situation also in the same time so could be true that Robert reached to north pole in 37 days. But, professor says tom's situation was not as same as Robert's, Although, they both arrived after 37 days. because tom did not have to make any food and he supported by plane.
In the end reading passage says how photographs explain the place by the shades. however, woman says photographs could be faded during this time that was about 100 years ago, also, it could be changed by himself to prove his claim.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, second, so, as to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 1373.03311258 71% => OK
No of words: 205.0 270.72406181 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78536585366 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22326672525 2.5805825403 86% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 145.348785872 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580487804878 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 419.366225166 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9131059105 49.2860985944 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 110.228320801 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7777777778 21.698381199 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 7.06452816374 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269706799504 0.272083759551 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103064477779 0.0996497079465 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537566889764 0.0662205650399 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144652845033 0.162205337803 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628946104103 0.0443174109184 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 53.8541721854 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.2367328918 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 63.6247240618 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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