TPO-31 - Integrated Writing Task A fossil skeleton of a dinosaur called Sinosauropteryx, preserved in volcanic ash, was discovered in Liaoning, China, in 1996. Interestingly, the fossil included a pattern of fine lines surrounding the skeletal bones. Some

The article discusses a fascinating topic pertaining to disprove the sinosauropteryx fossil of dinosaurs in the past age which has a fine line that represents fossil have no features and provide three reasons to support. However, the professor explains that sinosauropteryx fossil of dinosaurs represent the features of feathers are present in the past age and oppose each of the following author reasons.

first of all, The passage discusses that sinosauropteryx fossil of dinosaurs may carry skin features instead of features and its may be misrepresented after the death of dinosaurs. he states that the fine line is unlike decomposed of fossil skin. he additionally states that every fossil has different from dinosaurs fossils. clearly, a disparity exists between the article and the evidence exhibited by the professor. as a result, we can safely assume that its features of the dinosaur's

second, the article pushes forth the idea that sinosauropteryx fossil of dinosaurs fine line may be created by frills, not features. however, the classroom discussion contends that by highlighting that, features and frills have the different chemical analysis that indicates features characteristics. consequently, we can argue that indeed the claim made in reading is unsustainable

finally, the reading posits that their features present in the backside and near the tail which does not represent the features. the prof argues that that features may be used in the other purpose like attacking their mate. additionally, it may be used as other function. so this point also refutes by the professor and unjustly the reading claims.

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Average: 8.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, as a result, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1373.03311258 101% => OK
No of words: 255.0 270.72406181 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43921568627 5.08290768461 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04853473227 2.5805825403 118% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 145.348785872 89% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509803921569 0.540411800872 94% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 419.366225166 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.595704503 49.2860985944 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.583333333 110.228320801 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 21.698381199 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06452816374 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 4.19205298013 286% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284342862419 0.272083759551 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111262830574 0.0996497079465 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079380153645 0.0662205650399 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183055518601 0.162205337803 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609366547365 0.0443174109184 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.3589403974 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.8541721854 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.2367328918 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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