The article talks about the three possibilities of the where this strange noise which heard during 1960 to 1980 by Russian submarines came from. however, the professor rejects each theory by bringing her convincing results.
First, the author states that this noise is for male and female Ocra whales who live in this area. they make this sound in order to attract each other .the professor opposes this idea by saying that these whales live near the sea surface. as submarine flow in the deeper part of the ocean, they couldn't detect and record their voice. therefore, that strange voice couldn't be for them.
Second, the reading claims that there is giant squid which because of their soft bodies they can't be detected by sonar. however, due to their intelligence brain, that voice might be produced by them. in contrary, the professor states that the Russian submarine detect this voice from 1960 to 1980 and after that, it disappeared. meanwhile, giant squids live in the ocean until today.and also scholars didn't find any reason to show that if this sound is for them why it vanished suddenly.
Third, the passage says that this sound would be recorded from some military submarine which secretly patrolling the area. but the professor says that it doesn't hold up, the sound which they recorded, change it's direction quickly and if it voice were from a submarine it should have some engine sound what should be recorded with Russian marine too. until now there isn't any submarine which is too quick and has a silent engineer to let Russian relate this strange sound to them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...his sound in order to attract each other .the professor opposes this idea by sayin...
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...these whales live near the sea surface. as submarine flow in the deeper part of th...
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...w in the deeper part of the ocean, they couldnt detect and record their voice. therefor...
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... couldnt detect and record their voice. therefore, that strange voice couldnt be for them...
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...ir voice. therefore, that strange voice couldnt be for them. Second, the reading cla...
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...which because of their soft bodies they cant be detected by sonar. however, due to t...
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..., that voice might be produced by them. in contrary, the professor states that the...
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...to 1980 and after that, it disappeared. meanwhile, giant squids live in the ocean until t...
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...the ocean until today.and also scholars didnt find any reason to show that if this so...
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...he area. but the professor says that it doesnt hold up, the sound which they recorded,...
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... change its direction quickly and if it voice were from a submarine it should have so...
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...ld be recorded with Russian marine too. until now there isnt any submarine which is t...
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...ith Russian marine too. until now there isnt any submarine which is too quick and ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 22.412803532 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1373.03311258 96% => OK
No of words: 270.0 270.72406181 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88518518519 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20281961724 2.5805825403 85% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 145.348785872 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559259259259 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 419.366225166 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.309090886 49.2860985944 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.461538462 110.228320801 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 21.698381199 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.06452816374 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 4.19205298013 406% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38480628117 0.272083759551 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136305212934 0.0996497079465 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694177124506 0.0662205650399 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228633101358 0.162205337803 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660748366285 0.0443174109184 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.3589403974 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.8541721854 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.42419426049 85% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 63.6247240618 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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