The reading passage talks about the reduction of frogs and then provide three solutions to solve this problem. however, the professors decline each method by providing reasons and example.
First, the passage states that pesticide is one of the biggest reason of frogs declination.and it said that one way that can help to forbid is that set a rigid low for farmers to not to use this chemical pesticide. in contrary, the professor said that this method isn't a fair way. she says that farming is a competitive manner and if farmer won't let them use pesticide their product wouldn't have enough quality for selling and they would lose more crops than others.there fore economically isn't an efficient way.
Second, the article claims that another reason for this numerous extinction is to kill fungs or treat frogs who took it. the professor opposes this idea by saying that.this way isn't convincing for treatment of frogs.indivisualy should be captured and treated which needs lots of time and expenses,moreover, others frogs who aren't mature needs to check and treat too.therefore this plan is too complex and expensive which means that it's such an impossible way.
Third, the assignment says that inhalation of frogs habitat is another reason for their reduction which the main reason for the is human activities, therefore, they have to restrict they development on wetland and protect the lakes,but the professor states something different.she says that the lakes and wetland are going to be reduced because of global warming, not human activities. hence if this law is set, it wouldn't have any effect on the dryness of this water land.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
... three solutions to solve this problem. however, the professors decline each method by ...
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Suggestion: In
... to not to use this chemical pesticide. in contrary, the professor said that this ...
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...ry, the professor said that this method isnt a fair way. she says that farming is a ...
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... said that this method isnt a fair way. she says that farming is a competitive mann...
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Suggestion: wouldn't
...nt let them use pesticide their product wouldnt have enough quality for selling and the...
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Suggestion: therefore
... they would lose more crops than others.there fore economically isnt an efficient way. ...
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...ops than others.there fore economically isnt an efficient way. Second, the articl...
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...poses this idea by saying that.this way isnt convincing for treatment of frogs.indiv...
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Suggestion: , moreover
...ed which needs lots of time and expenses,moreover, others frogs who arent mature needs to...
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...and expenses,moreover, others frogs who arent mature needs to check and treat too.the...
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Suggestion: , but
...lopment on wetland and protect the lakes,but the professor states something differen...
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...f global warming, not human activities. hence if this law is set, it wouldnt have any...
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Suggestion: hence,
...f global warming, not human activities. hence if this law is set, it wouldnt have any...
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Suggestion: wouldn't
...ctivities. hence if this law is set, it wouldnt have any effect on the dryness of this ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1373.03311258 100% => OK
No of words: 271.0 270.72406181 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08856088561 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78081925086 2.5805825403 108% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586715867159 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 419.366225166 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 21.2450331126 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.416912518 49.2860985944 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 153.222222222 110.228320801 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1111111111 21.698381199 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 7.06452816374 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 4.19205298013 334% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262999641509 0.272083759551 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10338436658 0.0996497079465 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497801474931 0.0662205650399 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157182836091 0.162205337803 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03427166285 0.0443174109184 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.3589403974 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 53.8541721854 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.0289183223 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 63.6247240618 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.498013245 133% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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