tpo 34-integ
Both the reading and listening parts offer two opposing views about the possible reasons of sea cow's extinction. While the passage lists three theories for the possible causes of this extinction, the professor mentions the contradictory to those specific assumptions and presents some clues to call them into the question.
Firstly, according to the text, one of the possible reasons for this extinction is the overhunting of sea cows by the native Siberian people. However, the lecturer casts doubt on the accuracy of this surmise. As he explains, the size of the sea cow was so giant, it was nine meters tall and weighed ten tons; therefore, few of them can feed the entire native people for a month. Furthermore, the native Siberian people were no highly populated; thus, they did not require a huge amount of food sources. So, there is no reason that the native people hunted the high number of sea cows without really requiring them.
Secondly, the reading section mentioned to the possible decrement of the Klep, which was the food source of the sea cow, as the disturbances of ecosystem and feasibility of the extinction of sea cows. On the contrast, the listening part challenges this possibility. The professor asserts that there is no clue or evidence that such a severe ecosystem disturbance occurred in 1768. According to the lecturer's assertion, if there was such distinctive disturbance, other animals should also be affected by it. For instance, there should be the decrement of whales' population; however, there is no record about these types of decline. Consequently, this hypothesis cannot be accountable for this extinction.
Finally, meanwhile, the passage considers the arrival of European fur traders to the Siberia as the possible causes of this extinction, the instructor, on the other hand, refutes this surmise. Based on the professor's logic, although by traders' arrival, the sea cows were extinct completely, the decrements of the population had been started the hundred years ago, and they were not the main reason of this extinction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 399, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'lecturers'' or 'lecturer's'?
Suggestion: lecturers'; lecturer's
...ance occurred in 1768. According to the lecturers assertion, if there was such distinctiv...
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Line 7, column 207, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'professors'' or 'professor's'?
Suggestion: professors'; professor's
...and, refutes this surmise. Based on the professors logic, although by traders arrival, the...
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Line 7, column 237, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'traders'' or 'trader's'?
Suggestion: traders'; trader's
...ed on the professors logic, although by traders arrival, the sea cows were extinct comp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 5.01324503311 359% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1373.03311258 126% => OK
No of words: 336.0 270.72406181 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80424746677 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 145.348785872 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 419.366225166 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1606308661 49.2860985944 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.733333333 110.228320801 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 21.698381199 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06452816374 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40389596381 0.272083759551 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126405740214 0.0996497079465 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106120027858 0.0662205650399 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238715271364 0.162205337803 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568916113114 0.0443174109184 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.3589403974 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.2367328918 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 63.6247240618 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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