Essay topics:
tpo 40
The article states that the conditions on Venus are so extereme and inhospitable that maintaining a human presence there would be impossible and provides three reasons of support. However, the professor explains that is a chalenging possiple by establish a station 50 km under the atmosphere of Venuse and refutes each of the auther's reasons.
First, the reading passage says that. The professor refutes this point by saying that. He explains that.
Second, the article argues that. However, the professor counter this claim by poining out that. Furthermore, he explains that.
Third, the reading states that. The professor refutes this by saying that.
Votes
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, second, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.4613686534 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 30.3222958057 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 559.0 1373.03311258 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 103.0 270.72406181 38% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42718446602 5.08290768461 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.18573250055 4.04702891845 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64769225844 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 60.0 145.348785872 41% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582524271845 0.540411800872 108% => OK
syllable_count: 160.2 419.366225166 38% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 10.0 21.2450331126 47% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.5710545986 49.2860985944 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.9 110.228320801 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.3 21.698381199 47% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06452816374 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107062396976 0.272083759551 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405189196902 0.0996497079465 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670109955402 0.0662205650399 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0669648033503 0.162205337803 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084390427567 0.0443174109184 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.3589403974 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 53.8541721854 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.0289183223 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.73 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 63.6247240618 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 10.7273730684 37% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.498013245 57% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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