Both lecture and article discuss conditions on the venus. According to the article, venus is more danger and inhospitable for human survive. Whereas, according to the lecture, human presence on venus is not challenges because of construct the stations float as the balloon in the air. The station is 50 kilometer in venus surface height.
Firstly, the passage implies that in venus surface 90 times greater pressure than earth. This extreme pressure of the land human crushed as well. On the contrary with this, the lecturer mentions that venus atmosphere high but station far to 50 kilometers in which equal pressure as similar as earth, therefore, not perilous for the human.
Secondly, the article emphasizes that venus surface mostly carbon dioxide, nitrogen, and sulfuric acid. It is impossible to supply regularly water and oxygen. In contrast with this, the speaker explains that venus atmosphere components such as carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid help to produce the water and oxygen by the chemical process. Sufficient chemical use for production of the water and oxygen.
Thirdly, the author states that 60 percent sunlight reflect back to space by thick cloud and 40 percent sunlight reach to the sun. Thick layer carbon dioxide averts the light to reflect, as result, less light prevent the use of solar cell which produces the electricity. However, the professor points out that station away from the 50 kilometers far and atmosphere not thick therefore it filters the sun lights and reflects space. electricity produced by the solar cell.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 304, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kilometer' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kilometers'.
Suggestion: kilometers
...e balloon in the air. The station is 50 kilometer in venus surface height. Firstly, the...
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Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...o supply regularly water and oxygen. In contrast with this, the speaker explains that ve...
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Line 4, column 431, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Electricity
...ters the sun lights and reflects space. electricity produced by the solar cell.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, well, whereas, in contrast, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 22.412803532 49% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1373.03311258 95% => OK
No of words: 251.0 270.72406181 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.203187251 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52077603851 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 145.348785872 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561752988048 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 419.366225166 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.0860468973 49.2860985944 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0666666667 110.228320801 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7333333333 21.698381199 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06452816374 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387501555962 0.272083759551 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128417593091 0.0996497079465 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045336733377 0.0662205650399 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215979885573 0.162205337803 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398171884093 0.0443174109184 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.3589403974 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 63.6247240618 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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