In this set of material, the reading passage suggests three conditions in the Venus make the live on it's surface impossible. However, the lecture finds all the idea dubious and skeptical and there are new challenge makes the life there certainly possible by establishing a station floating on Venus surface like balloon, and the professor provides some helpful reasons.
First of all, the reading passage claims that the atmospheric pressure on Venus is at least greater 90 times than on Earth. So, any spacecraft that have landed there will be crushed by this extreme pressure. On the contrary, the professor refutes this point by explaining that the flooded balloon station will be on a height of fifty kilometers above the Venus surface, and at that height the pressure is same to the pressure on the Earth.
Furthermore, it mentioned in the passage that there are no water reservoirs on Venus surface, also, the atmosphere contains a high quantities of carbon dioxide, sulfuric acid and nitrogen. But there are no water vapor or oxygen. So, it will be very hard to bring water and oxygen from the Earth. Conversely, the professor discuss that the organic compounds that exist on Venus atmosphere like carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid could be used on station to produce sufficient quantities of water and oxygen necessary for life.
Finally, the reading passage poses that there is little sunlight reaches the Venus surface as the thick clouds reflected 60 percent of the light back into space. That will cause in lack of produce solar power cells to generate electricity. In contrast, the professor claim that the stationary exist above 50 kilometers where the clouds are very thin. That's will make it to reflect the sunlight on surface and hence produce the electricity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: A_PLURAL
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'quantity'?
...e, also, the atmosphere contains a high quantities of carbon dioxide, sulfuric acid and ni...
Line 7, column 352, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
...ometers where the clouds are very thin. Thats will make it to reflect the sunlight on...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, at least, in contrast, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1373.03311258 109% => OK
No of words: 295.0 270.72406181 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05423728814 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56041956487 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 145.348785872 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515254237288 0.540411800872 95% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 419.366225166 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.7426396987 49.2860985944 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.692307692 110.228320801 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 21.698381199 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06452816374 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398321646272 0.272083759551 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142774995474 0.0996497079465 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073097402975 0.0662205650399 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222067084113 0.162205337803 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881278836115 0.0443174109184 199% => OK
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.2367328918 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 63.6247240618 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 70 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21 Out of 30
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