TPO 44 - Integrated Writing Task
The main idea of the both the passage and the talk is about the coins which were found at the Native American archaeological site. In the text, the author claims that there are some evidence which represent these coins are not a genuine piece of historical evidence. The lecturer challenges all the viable arguments mentioned in the reading. She is of the opinion that none of these reasons is accurate.
Firstly, the author sates that place where coins were discovered is very far from other sites which represents the presence of Norse. Conversely, the lecturer brings up the idea that other objects were found from distant locations. Furthermore, she says that American people traveled great distances to obtain their needs. Thus, it is no secret that this fact is accurate about silver coin.
In addition, the author asserts that archaeologist did not find other coins beside this coin. The lecturer, on the other hand, rebuts this by pointing out the idea that there were no other coins because settlements are not permanent, and there were on travel to other location. Therefore, they packed all their valuable stuffs such as coins when they traveled to other places.
Eventually, the author holds the opinion that Norse was aware about this fact that silver coins were not precious in Europe at that time. The lecturer, however, dismisses this notion by asserting that although silver coins were not used by people as a currency at that time, but the coins were unusual objects and they could use these coins for other purpose such a decorating issues or as a jewelry. Moreover, she says that individuals in that time could utilized coins for trade.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...at none of these reasons is accurate. Firstly, the author sates that place whe...
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Suggestion:
...s fact is accurate about silver coin. In addition, the author asserts that arc...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... when they traveled to other places. Eventually, the author holds the opinion...
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Line 7, column 462, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'utilize'
Suggestion: utilize
...ays that individuals in that time could utilized coins for trade.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, firstly, furthermore, however, moreover, so, therefore, thus, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.4613686534 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 12.0772626932 166% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 22.412803532 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1373.03311258 101% => OK
No of words: 279.0 270.72406181 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98207885305 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40710292135 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 145.348785872 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516129032258 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 419.366225166 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7202048704 49.2860985944 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2857142857 110.228320801 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 21.698381199 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06452816374 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424706374691 0.272083759551 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149874280881 0.0996497079465 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086491889695 0.0662205650399 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267657968467 0.162205337803 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201929645134 0.0443174109184 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.3589403974 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.8541721854 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.2367328918 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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