The reading states that the 200 milion aged fossil structures could not be related to bee nests and provides three reasons of support. On the other hand, the professor argues that it is perfectly possible that bees exsisted 200 milion years ago and refutes each author's reasons.
Initially, the reading says that until now no fossils of actual bees have been found, In fact the earliest evidence of a exsistance bee is 100 milion years old. In contrast, the professor says that preserved body of a bee could not be found, because bees' body preserves in some stincky liquite that trees produce and these condition became common later.
Furthermore, the reading claims that the earlliest flower plants got back to 125 milion years ago, hence no food supply for bees was back then. On the contrary, the professor argues that bees could eat other planets instead of flowers.
Last but not least, the reading says that chamber of bee nests do not resemble modern ones. The author advocates that cahmbers of modern bee nests are closed by caps that have a spiral pattern, which lack back then, so structures would be made by other insects, such as wood-boring beetles. Nevertheless, the professor refutes this notion by saying that these structure of the fossils contain some kind of water proof materials that resemble water proof materials used by modern bees. Both of the substances have same distinctive composition.
because bees' body preserves in some stincky liquite that trees produce and these condition became common later.
because bees' body preserves in some stincky liquite that are produced by trees and these condition became common later.
because bees' body preserves in some stincky liquite produced by trees and these condition became common later.
Sentence: The reading states that the 200 milion aged fossil structures could not be related to bee nests and provides three reasons of support.
Error: milion Suggestion: million
Sentence: On the other hand, the professor argues that it is perfectly possible that bees exsisted 200 milion years ago and refutes each author's reasons.
Error: exsisted Suggestion: existed
Error: milion Suggestion: million
Sentence: Initially, the reading says that until now no fossils of actual bees have been found, In fact the earliest evidence of a exsistance bee is 100 milion years old.
Error: exsistance Suggestion: existence
Error: milion Suggestion: million
Sentence: In contrast, the professor says that preserved body of a bee could not be found, because bees' body preserves in some stincky liquite that trees produce and these condition became common later.
Error: stincky Suggestion: sticky
Error: liquite Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Furthermore, the reading claims that the earlliest flower plants got back to 125 milion years ago, hence no food supply for bees was back then.
Error: earlliest Suggestion: earliest
Error: milion Suggestion: million
Sentence: The author advocates that cahmbers of modern bee nests are closed by caps that have a spiral pattern, which lack back then, so structures would be made by other insects, such as wood-boring beetles.
Error: cahmbers Suggestion: chamber
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 10 2
No. of Sentences: 10 12
No. of Words: 237 250
No. of Characters: 1153 1200
No. of Different Words: 135 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.924 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.865 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.329 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 81 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 58 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 34 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.7 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.824 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.8 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.402 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.646 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.066 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4