TPO 48 - Integrated Writing Task
The reading passage explains three possible solutions to the problem of decline in the number of frogs population. However, the professor states that these solutions are not practical and she gives three points to support her claim.
At first, the reading suggests that the a mount of pesticide which is used in agricultural activities must reduce because they are harmful for the frog habitats. On the other hand, the lecturer contradicts the reading's recommendation because farmers rely on pesticides to protect their yield and if they are restricted by law to not to use this chemical substance, they undergo severe difficulties.
Additionally, the author of the passage points the use of new treatment to kill fungus which are the factor of the dehydration of frog's skin. While, the lecturer says that if we want that new treatment works, we should do it for each individuals frog. Moreover, this work must be apply for each new generation of frogs. That is why, this treatment is not only arduous to apply but also too expensive.
Finally, the reading passages asserts that human excessive use of water destroy the potential habitats of frogs. Therefor, lakes and suitable water should be protected to prevent decreasing the number of frogs. However, the professor accuse global warming as the cause of this reduction and she says that we cannot prevent global warming by protecting water and habitats.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
... At first, the reading suggests that the a mount of pesticide which is used in agr...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'readings'' or 'reading's'?
Suggestion: readings'; reading's
...ther hand, the lecturer contradicts the readings recommendation because farmers rely on ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s skin. While, the lecturer says that if we want that new treatment works, we sho...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1186.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 231.0 270.72406181 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1341991342 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70756294426 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558441558442 0.540411800872 103% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 419.366225166 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5315377147 49.2860985944 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.818181818 110.228320801 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 21.698381199 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06452816374 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303889219649 0.272083759551 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108973959339 0.0996497079465 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713518422249 0.0662205650399 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162719805445 0.162205337803 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487505571802 0.0443174109184 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.3589403974 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.7273730684 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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