tpo 49 the humpbacks whales
The material discusses the concept of humpback whales migrate by using the stars to navigate. While the reading looks at the topic from one perspective, the listening challenges certain points outlined in the reading passage.
Firstly, the reading details specific points regarding this topic, namely humpback whales are intelligent enough to use stars to navigate. Next, they migrate in straight lines, so they use stars as external objects to orient themselves. Finally, humpback whales have special behavior, which is spy-hopping to looks at the stars to get information helping them to navigate.
Conversely, the listening challenges the points, one specific contradiction is, there is no connection between intelligent and using stars to navigate. Other animals, such as dogs do not highly intelligent, but they can use stars to navigate. Thus, humpback whales just were born with intelligent, not particularly to use stars to navigate. In addition to that, humpback whales could use earth magnetic field as external objects to migrate in straight lines, science they are sensitive to it. By using biomagnetite, they can orient themselves. One final point, the spy-hopping behavior is rare, but it exists in other marine animals. Sharks do this behavior; however, they do not migrate, they just want to hunt. Furthermore, they do that during the day, while no stars can be seen.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 785, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng the day, while no stars can be seen.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, regarding, so, thus, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 12.0772626932 25% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1173.0 1373.03311258 85% => OK
No of words: 218.0 270.72406181 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38073394495 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81939606874 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 145.348785872 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52752293578 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 419.366225166 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2542541483 49.2860985944 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2307692308 110.228320801 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 21.698381199 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06452816374 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365166262072 0.272083759551 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150316990695 0.0996497079465 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721212606645 0.0662205650399 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267710371701 0.162205337803 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874702379238 0.0443174109184 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.3589403974 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.2367328918 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 63.6247240618 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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