Both reading and listening discuss the migration pattern of humpback whales. The reading states that h. whales can migrate due to some features and provide several reasons. However, the speaker find it fascinating and say that evidence is not convincing.
First of all, the article claims that whales are enough smart to migrate by using stars. Whales have superior brain than most of animals and It helps them to navigate. The speaker says that intelligent and migrating long distances does not have connection. There are other animals such as duck migrate long distace but they are not intelligent. It makes no sence.
Secondly, the article posits that h. whale use straight line to migrate long distances. Other animals who live outside of see use land shape to navigate them. The H. whales use to star to migrate at night. The speaker disagree that they have biomagnative space in their brain. They use world magnetic fields like other animals rather than landscape.
Thirdly, the article states that they have special feature which name is spy-hopping. They are looking at the stars and use the information to migrate. The speaker opppose this point by saying that the sharks also have spy-hopping but they do not migrate. It has nothing to do with it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t of all, the article claims that whales are enough smart to migrate by using sta...
^^
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the animals') or simply say ''most animals''.
Suggestion: most of the animals; most animals
... stars. Whales have superior brain than most of animals and It helps them to navigate. The spea...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...d shape to navigate them. The H. whales use to star to migrate at night. The speake...
^^^
Line 5, column 219, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'disagrees'.
Suggestion: disagrees
...o star to migrate at night. The speaker disagree that they have biomagnative space in th...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, look, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1058.0 1373.03311258 77% => OK
No of words: 211.0 270.72406181 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01421800948 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43242953877 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587677725118 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 419.366225166 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 21.2450331126 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5811963613 49.2860985944 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.6842105263 110.228320801 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.1052631579 21.698381199 51% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.84210526316 7.06452816374 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.27373068433 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.409305565301 0.272083759551 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113823233095 0.0996497079465 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876018335682 0.0662205650399 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237702192845 0.162205337803 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729802880965 0.0443174109184 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.3589403974 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 53.8541721854 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.0289183223 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.59 12.2367328918 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.42419426049 91% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 63.6247240618 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.7273730684 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.498013245 61% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.