tpo 51 elephant behaviors

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tpo 51 elephant behaviors

The material discusses various beliefs about elephant behaviors. While the reading looks at fasinatic elephants' behaviors from one perspective, the listening claims that there is misunderstanding of these behaviors.

First, the author mentions that elephants know that they are nearing to die. On the other hand, the lecturer opposes this and states it does not assume when old elephants break way from herds, they know that they will die. The professor posits that there is another explaination of this. He mentions that old elephants have weak teeth, so they could not shew regular vegetations. The speaker adds that they want soft vegetations, which are usually found near water. The listening explain that old elephants gather near water and die in an area called elephant graveyards.

Second, the writer says that elephants have artistic ability. On the contrary, the lecturer refutes this and claims that elephants could be trained to paintbrush. The professor explains that elephants have very sensitive ears that could be strokes to teach elephants to do trickes. Furthermore,the lecturer points out that when elephants paint lines using a brush that does not repesent flower or animal, but they are trianed to do this.

Third, the reading adds that, elephants scared from mice. Conversely, the professor contraticed this and contends that elephants have a frear form unfamiliar animals.The listening adds that it is a natural instinct. However, elephants, which live in zoos do not afraid of mice, because they are familiar to them, and they are not reprsent a threat to them.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ach elephants to do trickes. Furthermore,the lecturer points out that when elephants...
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Suggestion: The
...ts have a frear form unfamiliar animals.The listening adds that it is a natural ins...
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Suggestion:
...iliar to them, and they are not reprsent a threat to them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, furthermore, however, look, second, so, third, while, on the contrary, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 12.0772626932 174% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 22.412803532 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1339.0 1373.03311258 98% => OK
No of words: 253.0 270.72406181 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29249011858 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70287535027 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 419.366225166 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 14.0 8.23620309051 170% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.9217668459 49.2860985944 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2666666667 110.228320801 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06452816374 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206536056773 0.272083759551 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808883701426 0.0996497079465 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496484585787 0.0662205650399 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135004930794 0.162205337803 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039588085814 0.0443174109184 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.3589403974 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.2367328918 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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