According to reading passage it is safe to create colonization in the asteroid rather than moon. The author illustrates three reasons to support his opinion. Based on the passage, people will be more benefited since landing on asteroid is more safe than moon, the colonization will be more profitable due to some valuable resource and finally it is easy to reach in asteroid. But, the lecturer clearly opposes this idea and provides specific reasons to describe the problems associated to landing on asteroid.
First, the writer claims that, due to lower gravity on asteroid it is safe to land on asteroid than moon. However, the professor disagrees with that by saying this, although landing is safe but there is risk factor like health problems. Since lower gravity reduces bone and muscle density.
Second, the reading states that, asteroid are rich in precious metal that make the colonization more profitable. On the contrary, the speaker suggests that it does not seem such profitable because, the transportation cost reduces the profit. Again, he put forward his idea by adding that plenty of transportation of valuable metals in the market reduces the price and this case it will not so profitable.
Third, the passage mentions that reaching to the asteroid is easy than moon. On the other hand, the lecture cast doubt on this idea, he says that in spite of easy reaching, it is more difficult to return from the asteroid. Additionally he claims that, asteroid become close to the earth at a certain point and being in a continuous movement it is not so easy to reach to the asteroid
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 224, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
... difficult to return from the asteroid. Additionally he claims that, asteroid become close t...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, third, in spite of, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 30.3222958057 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1373.03311258 97% => OK
No of words: 269.0 270.72406181 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95167286245 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61868931994 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 145.348785872 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513011152416 0.540411800872 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 419.366225166 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6210144243 49.2860985944 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.461538462 110.228320801 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 21.698381199 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06452816374 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.047540703775 0.272083759551 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0169618242173 0.0996497079465 17% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0240827534866 0.0662205650399 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0281592107157 0.162205337803 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0223314912583 0.0443174109184 50% => OK
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.3589403974 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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