TPO 55 INT
The passage and the professor are discussing the reason why a unique whale produces 52-hertz waves.
The reading states that the whale might be a hybrid and its unique vocal feature stems from the combination of its parents’ features, which their species are known. it is common for offspring to combine the characteristics of their parents. The professor, however, casts doubt on this argument by providing information on other hybrid whales. he states that this whale has a unique migration route in contrast to other whale migrations’ patterns. hybrids in nature follow their parents’ migration path and have the same path as one of their parents has. But this whale has an unusual migration pattern.
The reading argues that the unique sound vibration of this whale might be the result of hearing damage . As humans without hearing ability may produce sounds that differ from what other humans produce, this can be the case for this whale too. The professor finds this argument irrational since vocal vibration stems from animals’ throats and has nothing to do with their hearing ability. he put forth the idea that it is the physical characteristics of the animals’ vocal apparatus which define the features of the generated sound. Therefore a whale with a hearing problem can not produce a completely different sound, and this whale must have a very unusual throat structure.
The reading also argues that this uniqueness may indicate that this whale is the last survivor of its species, and other whales of this species are now gone. The professor refutes this idea. he states that since scientists have been monitoring this vibration for many decades and they have not found any other evidence of similar sounds, there were no other whales like this one.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nique whale produces 52-hertz waves. The reading states that the whale might ...
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...eatures, which their species are known. it is common for offspring to combine the...
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...heir species are known. it is common for offspring to combine the characteristics...
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...ing information on other hybrid whales. he states that this whale has a unique mig...
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...has a unique migration route in contrast to other whale migrations’ patterns. hyb...
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...t to other whale migrations’ patterns. hybrids in nature follow their parents’ migrati...
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...le has an unusual migration pattern. The reading argues that the unique sound...
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...le might be the result of hearing damage . As humans without hearing ability may p...
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...thing to do with their hearing ability. he put forth the idea that it is the physi...
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Suggestion: Therefore,
...ne the features of the generated sound. Therefore a whale with a hearing problem can not ...
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...ave a very unusual throat structure. The reading also argues that this unique...
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... gone. The professor refutes this idea. he states that since scientists have been ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 22.412803532 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1373.03311258 109% => OK
No of words: 292.0 270.72406181 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1404109589 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53811123536 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513698630137 0.540411800872 95% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 419.366225166 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9632643577 49.2860985944 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.066666667 110.228320801 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 21.698381199 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06452816374 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 4.19205298013 286% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110672256716 0.272083759551 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453430403457 0.0996497079465 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342606112905 0.0662205650399 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666994915513 0.162205337803 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390516936081 0.0443174109184 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 63.6247240618 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.