TPO INTEGRATED 17

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TPO INTEGRATED 17

There has been some debate among scientists whether the increase in the human's population cause decline in the bird's population. The lecture claims that the bird's population  has been increased by the increase of the human' population. However, the reading refutes stating that there is decline in the birds population.
 
 
The first point of dispute is if the birds natural habitat decrease with the increase of the human's population. The lecturer says that in the urban and suburban places people are developing better and larger habitats  for many types of birds. Which in contrast people in these places are complaining from the increase of the bird population. The reading contradicts this point saying that the increase in the human's population leads to vanishing in the birds habitat.
 
Another controversial issue is if using  land for agriculture cause decline in the birds habitat. The lecture contends that the increase in the agriculture is done by increasing the use of more productive crops, not by the use of more lands. But, the reading refutes this point stating that for the agriculture activities  to keep in pace with the increase in the human population, using birds habitat to plant more crops.
 
 
The final point of dispute is if the using of pesticides decrease the bird population. The lecture says that the people todays are aware with the consequences of using pesticides. So companies are using two different types of pesticides. The first one is the less  toxic one. The second one pets resistances one, which less attracts birds. However, the reading opposes stating that birds are easily affected by pesticides either by eating infected birds or by drinking contaminated  water that lead to the decline  in the birds habitat.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 73, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
... scientists whether the increase in the humans population cause decline in the birds p...
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Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'birds'' or 'bird's'?
Suggestion: birds'; bird's
... humans population cause decline in the birds population. The lecture claims that the...
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Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'birds'' or 'bird's'?
Suggestion: birds'; bird's
...population. The lecture claims that the birds population  has been increased by the i...
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Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...lecture claims that the birds population  has been increased by the increase of th...
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Line 1, column 302, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'birds'' or 'bird's'?
Suggestion: birds'; bird's
...es stating that there is decline in the birds population.     The first point of d...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...re is decline in the birds population.     The first point of dispute is if the bir...
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Line 4, column 94, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...bitat decrease with the increase of the humans population. The lecturer says that in t...
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Line 4, column 217, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...re developing better and larger habitats  for many types of birds. Which in contra...
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Line 4, column 244, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rger habitats  for many types of birds. Which in contrast people in these places are ...
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Line 4, column 410, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...s point saying that the increase in the humans population leads to vanishing in the bi...
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Line 4, column 454, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'birds'' or 'bird's'?
Suggestion: birds'; bird's
...ns population leads to vanishing in the birds habitat.   Another controversial iss...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ds to vanishing in the birds habitat.   Another controversial issue is if using ...
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Line 6, column 40, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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... Another controversial issue is if using  land for agriculture cause decline in th...
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Line 6, column 84, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'birds'' or 'bird's'?
Suggestion: birds'; bird's
...nd for agriculture cause decline in the birds habitat. The lecture contends that the ...
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Line 6, column 322, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ting that for the agriculture activities  to keep in pace with the increase in the...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ng birds habitat to plant more crops.     The final point of dispute is if the usi...
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Line 9, column 264, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...of pesticides. The first one is the less  toxic one. The second one pets resistanc...
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Line 9, column 482, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...fected birds or by drinking contaminated  water that lead to the decline  in the b...
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Line 9, column 514, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...aminated  water that lead to the decline  in the birds habitat.
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Line 9, column 523, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'birds'' or 'bird's'?
Suggestion: birds'; bird's
... water that lead to the decline  in the birds habitat.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 22.412803532 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1373.03311258 109% => OK
No of words: 291.0 270.72406181 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14089347079 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73904072466 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.422680412371 0.540411800872 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 465.3 419.366225166 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8348426592 49.2860985944 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 110.228320801 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 21.698381199 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06452816374 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 4.19205298013 477% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.394498624198 0.272083759551 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152393048246 0.0996497079465 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0914967433053 0.0662205650399 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263270703073 0.162205337803 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.037644851549 0.0443174109184 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.3589403974 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.8541721854 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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