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There has been some debates among whether there are solutions to prevent birds from getting injured by glass. The lecture says that there are no solution to stop birds from getting injured. However, the reading refutes, it claims that there are three possible solutions to prevent the birds from injuries.
The first point of dispute is if the one way glass will prevent the birds from any injures. The lecturer says that the one way glass reflects as mirrors and birds did not understand mirrors, when they see the reflection of the sky or the trees in the glasses, they think that it is true and they fly through the glasses. However, the reading refutes this point by saying that one way glass will protect the birds because they are transparent from only one direction, so birds will think they are a solid barriers.
Another controversial issue is if the colorful designs of the glass will protect birds from injuries. The lecture contents that the birds will not understand the small openings in the strips designs and they will think they are small holes and fly through them. Also, if the holes will be extreme small, the openings from the designs the room will be too dark. But, the author of the reading opposes this point saying that the designs with small openings will prevent the birds from getting injured. Also the openings allow the light to pass on to the rooms .
The final point of dispute is if the magnetic field will prevent the birds from getting injured.
The lecture asserts that birds only use magnetic field while they are migrating for a long distance. However, for short distances bird use their eye and the bright light to navigate. Yet, the passage disagrees. it claims that the magnetic field on the building will prevents birds from getting injured while they are flying and help them to navigate in the right directions.
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There has been some debates among whethe...
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...ebates among whether there are solutions to prevent birds from getting injured by...
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...s to prevent the birds from injuries. The first point of dispute is if the one...
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...n, so birds will think they are a solid barriers. Another controversial issue...
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...will think they are a solid barriers. Another controversial issue is if the c...
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... Another controversial issue is if the colorful designs of the glass will p...
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...s will not understand the small openings in the strips designs and they will thin...
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...prevent the birds from getting injured. Also the openings allow the light to pass on...
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... allow the light to pass on to the rooms . The final point of disput...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, while, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1373.03311258 116% => OK
No of words: 332.0 270.72406181 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78012048193 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20153507049 2.5805825403 85% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.430722891566 0.540411800872 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 440.1 419.366225166 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.55342163355 84% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4252000512 49.2860985944 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1875 110.228320801 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 21.698381199 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 7.06452816374 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 4.19205298013 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.441333752104 0.272083759551 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1664714402 0.0996497079465 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767507050851 0.0662205650399 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255285533212 0.162205337803 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682808499147 0.0443174109184 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.3589403974 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 53.8541721854 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.2367328918 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.42419426049 83% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 63.6247240618 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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