TPO INTEGRATED 48

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TPO INTEGRATED 48

The reading argues that the are three methods for preventing the frog's population decline. However, the lecture disagrees. It claims that all the methods mentioned in the passage have some problems.
 
 
The first point of dispute is the use of pesticides. The lecture claims that prohibiting pesticides is not economical or practical method. Farmers are competitor in the market for having better crops and higher yield. By using pesticides some farmer will be in sever danger by losing  their crops and getting  lower field. However, the reading argues that pesticides is the main cause for declining in the frogs population, which lead to sever breathing problems.
 
Another controversial issue is use of anti fungal treatment. The lecture asserts that the treatment is complex. Each frog needs to be treated individually. Moreover, the treatment will not prevent the disease from pass on to the off spring. But, the reading contends this point by saying that the fungus cause thicken to the frog's skins and lead to dehydration of the frogs.
 
 
The final issue of depute is protecting the frogs habitats . The lecture says that global warming is the main cause for declining in the frog's  population and may  other species  in  the recent century. Yet, the reading argues that human over use of water and damaging of the frog habitats is the main cause in the decline.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'frogs'' or 'frog's'?
Suggestion: frogs'; frog's
...he are three methods for preventing the frogs population decline. However, the lectur...
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...ed in the passage have some problems.     The first point of dispute is the use of...
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...farmer will be in sever danger by losing  their crops and getting  lower field. Ho...
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Line 4, column 309, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...anger by losing  their crops and getting  lower field. However, the reading argues...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'frogs'' or 'frog's'?
Suggestion: frogs'; frog's
... is the main cause for declining in the frogs population, which lead to sever breathi...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...hich lead to sever breathing problems.   Another controversial issue is use of an...
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...and lead to dehydration of the frogs.     The final issue of depute is protecting ...
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... depute is protecting the frogs habitats . The lecture says that global warming is...
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...he main cause for declining in the frogs  population and may  other species  in  t...
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...clining in the frogs  population and may  other species  in  the recent century. Y...
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...frogs  population and may  other species  in  the recent century. Yet, the reading...
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...s  population and may  other species  in  the recent century. Yet, the reading arg...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, may, moreover, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 22.412803532 49% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 1373.03311258 85% => OK
No of words: 231.0 270.72406181 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06060606061 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58197570542 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 145.348785872 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515151515152 0.540411800872 95% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 419.366225166 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 21.2450331126 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.560579554 49.2860985944 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0625 110.228320801 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4375 21.698381199 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 7.06452816374 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 4.19205298013 286% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 4.45695364238 202% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416351524693 0.272083759551 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121978996565 0.0996497079465 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834349710411 0.0662205650399 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248352930205 0.162205337803 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693743535249 0.0443174109184 157% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.3589403974 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 53.8541721854 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.498013245 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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