Tpo4
In this set of material,the author and the professor discuss whether dinosaurs were endothermal animals or not.The reading passage assumes that those ancient reptile animals were endothermal,and suggests three reasons. However, the listening passage repudiates what stated in the article and provides three counterclaims proving that the evidences of the article are not convincing.
First,the professor claims that the fossils of the polar dinosaur which found in the plar are does not proof that dinosaur was endothermal as the passage mentions. Since, the polar are was warmer than today and the dinosaurs at that time could not migrated and prefer to harbinat which casts doubt the article.
Second,the speaker thinks that even though the leg position of dinosaurs are similar to those modern endothermal animals like crocodiles and lizards which help them for running. It is unnecessary structured for dinosaurs to run only, it could be used for weight support and help those old anilmals to grow up and overcome their heavy body weight.Whereas, the reading passage has opposit view.
Third, the reading passage believes that the presence of Haversian canals which is necessary to allow those animals to grow quickly as most of endothermal bone animals in modern life.While, the professor thinks that the this canal is not enough clue to support the endothermal properties of dinosaurs, since, dinosaurs have another ring structure which indicates the time period of growth of those animals which shows that there were rapid in then slow followed by rapid growth which something impossible to endothermal animals to have this ability of growth.
the polar dinosaur which found in the plar
the polar dinosaur which are found in the plar
the polar dinosaur found in the plar
the polar are was warmer
the polar area was warmer
could not migrated and prefer to harbinat
could not migrate and prefer to harbinat
the leg position of dinosaurs are similar
the leg position ... is similar
It is unnecessary structured for dinosaurs
It is unnecessarily structured for dinosaurs
the presence of Haversian canals which is necessary to allow those animals to grow quickly as most of endothermal bone animals in modern life.
Description: what is the verb for this sentence? can you re-write this sentence?
Sentence: First,the professor claims that the fossils of the polar dinosaur which found in the plar are does not proof that dinosaur was endothermal as the passage mentions.
Error: plar Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Since, the polar are was warmer than today and the dinosaurs at that time could not migrated and prefer to harbinat which casts doubt the article.
Error: harbinat Suggestion: habitat
Sentence: It is unnecessary structured for dinosaurs to run only, it could be used for weight support and help those old anilmals to grow up and overcome their heavy body weight.Whereas, the reading passage has opposit view.
Error: opposit Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: anilmals Suggestion: animals
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 17 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 4 2
No. of Sentences: 8 12
No. of Words: 266 250
No. of Characters: 1366 1200
No. of Different Words: 140 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.039 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.135 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.467 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 102 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 83 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 45 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 33.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 18.693 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.625 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.443 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.729 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.133 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4