TPO52IntegratedTask-Asteroids are large space objects made of rock and ice. There are hundreds of thousands of asteroids in our solar system. Though we often hear ideas about establishing colonies of humans to live and work on our Moon or our neighboring planet, Mars, some think that sending people to an asteroid would actually be the best colonization option for a number of reasons. Low Gravity To begin with, asteroids are often much smaller than planets, so they have lower gravity. When landing a spaceship, the craft would not be pulled as strongly or as forcefully toward the asteroid's surface, making the landing safer than landing on the Moon or Mars; it would also allow a spacecraft to carry much more equipment needed to set up the colony. It would also be easier for the spacecraft to take off again, so the spaceship would need to carry considerably less fuel for the trip back to Earth. Mining Valuable Metals Next some asteroids are rich in valuable elements and precious metals that are relatively rare on Earth, such as gold and platinum. An asteroid colony would be extremely profitable and a good source of these raw materials. The colonists or businesses sponsoring them could more than pay for the cost of their support by mining minerals and sending them back to Earth. Easy to Reach Finally, asteroids are a good option for colonization because some of them would be very easy to reach. There are a number of asteroids that periodically come within or near Earth's orbit Some of them actually get closer to Earth than our Moon. So these asteroids would be much easier and more affordable to get to and get back from than a planet like Mars, which would require a two-year trip in each direction.
The reading passage and the lecture both discuss the workability of living in other planets. In the reading part, the author mentions that there are several benefits of landing on other planets. In the listening part, however, the apeaker challenges what the author states and rebuts the reasons, citing that the ideas are not practical.
To begin with, as mentioned in the article, the author sets forth that the asteroids have low gravity; therefore, it is easy to bringe people or equipments on there. Nevertheless, the speaker flatly contradicts the idea and contends that landing on those planets has lots of risks for human's health. Moreover, when scientists live just a few months in a spacecraft, their mustels and their bons coming too weak.
Secondly, the author poins out that individuals can extract raw materials such as metal and gold, which has profits for the government to invest in this process. Nonetheless, the author refutes the reasons asserting that it seems a profitable idea; howevere, when the government releases lots of metal form those planets, the price would reduced, and it does not make any benefits for their owners. In addition, the cost of transpotrting the metals are high, and it decreases the incomes, and it is not affordable any more.
Finally, the author claims that for reaching on them, people need just a short time because they come close to the earth even closer that moon. In contrast, the professor is of the opinion that they distances are varied between year and other year. it might be easy to go there, but earth is not readily accessiblle when they want to come back. As a matter of fact, orbiting around the sun become different in this time. therefore, the time to come back earth is not getting shorter.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'reduce'
Suggestion: reduce
...tal form those planets, the price would reduced, and it does not make any benefits for ...
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Line 5, column 489, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... are high, and it decreases the incomes, and it is not affordable any more. Fi...
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Line 7, column 200, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'distance'
Suggestion: distance
...e professor is of the opinion that they distances are varied between year and other year....
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Line 7, column 250, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...are varied between year and other year. it might be easy to go there, but earth is...
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Line 7, column 422, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
... the sun become different in this time. therefore, the time to come back earth is not get...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, in addition, in contrast, such as, as a matter of fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1373.03311258 107% => OK
No of words: 299.0 270.72406181 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91973244147 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51661073764 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 145.348785872 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57525083612 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 419.366225166 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7310645497 49.2860985944 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.071428571 110.228320801 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 21.698381199 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8571428571 7.06452816374 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232042213539 0.272083759551 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673679609326 0.0996497079465 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497302338846 0.0662205650399 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11581293203 0.162205337803 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562872364883 0.0443174109184 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.3589403974 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 63.6247240618 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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