Your friend has the opportunity to choose either one of two types of majors (fields of study), which one of the following two majors do you think is a better choice, and why?
• • A major that would allow him to finish years of study and get a degree sooner (so that he would begin to work full-time quickly).
• Or
• • A major that requires many years of study that would provide him with more employment opportunities and offers in the future. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Without a shadow of doubt, choosing a proper field of study is one of the most crucial decision ones should make in the lifetime. A prominent question which arises here is whether to choose a major which ends up sooner or to opt for a major with more extended time interval but more qualification and skill. In my viewpoint, selecting the field of study, which makes someone more skillful and provide more job offers, is the best choice despite the longer studying time. In the following paragraphs, I will demonstrate my perspective with more notable reasons and examples.
The first vital point to bear in mind is that during ages between 20 to 30, it is the best time to study and gain more expertise. Furthermore, people are more interested in studying rather than working because they are still young. Besides, they are more energetic and also family supports them in financial problems. Another primary reason which makes this period of life more brilliant and shining is that people are still bachelor and more focused. As an example, one of my university’s classmates got married when he was just 20. At first, he worked hard to earn money in order to buy a car, house, and other house facilities, so he did not dedicate enough time to university lessons and assignments, so he got disappointing grades at final exams. after two semesters, the situation got worse and university administrations fired him. years after, he admitted that if he paid more attention to the university and gained more expertise despite getting married, he would have a better job as well as a more comfortable life. so it is essential for students to choose their major carefully and make the most benefit from their golden age.
The second reason which deserves to write words about is that employers offer better jobs to those with a better resume and experience since they do not want to make their company a trial and error place for their employee! if someone studies more and spends more years in the academic atmosphere, he or she would obtain a better research resume by cooperating with the masters in different projects and also deserves a better job. To be more precise, university programs make students more qualified and provide some extra courses for those with longer studying intervals since they have more time rather than others with shorter studying period. For instance, one of my friends who studied doctoral in electrical engineering spent seven years in university, worked as a teacher assistant, laboratory researcher, and professor coworker in an industrial project. after graduation, he applied for three job offers in different companies and surprisingly, all the companies accepted his request, so he had a wide choice to opt for a job.
To sum up the stated paragraphs, it is crucial for students to make the right decision and to choose the correct major in university. they have to consider the long term effect of their choice and do not scarify the job opportunity due to graduating in a shorter time but with no chance to find a suitable job!
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, still, well, for instance, as well as, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 7.30242825607 342% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 22.412803532 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 30.3222958057 224% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2581.0 1373.03311258 188% => OK
No of words: 521.0 270.72406181 192% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95393474088 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77759609229 4.04702891845 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72230081189 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 145.348785872 187% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52207293666 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 815.4 419.366225166 194% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 2.5761589404 311% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.1725411531 49.2860985944 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.842105263 110.228320801 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4210526316 21.698381199 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.10526315789 7.06452816374 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 4.33554083885 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18202218921 0.272083759551 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613650268765 0.0996497079465 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476701783958 0.0662205650399 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121670447855 0.162205337803 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432962491164 0.0443174109184 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.3589403974 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.8541721854 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.0289183223 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.2367328918 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 63.6247240618 190% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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