Your friend has the opportunity to choose either one of two types of majors (fields of study), which one of the following two majors do you think is a better choice, and why?
Since the dawn of civilization, job has had one of the greatest roles in people's lives from around the world. Although some people would like to finish their study in order to find a job sooner, I firmly concur with the idea that if my friends studies more years, he will be successful in their future. There are some reasons, the most outstanding of which will be discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.
Firstly, it is undoubted that so influential have job opportunities been that they have had a great number of positive effects on people's lives all over the world, yet above all they have helped people to experience better life. One needs only refer to numerous prosperous people who have better life due to study more due the fact that they have a lot of valuable knowledge by their long time studying. An example will illustrate this viewpoint much better. My brother studied at university for 7 years, by doing so, when he graduated from his university, he had a lot of job opportunities and he did not have any worries about his future. I do believe that had he not studied for many years, he would not have had this volume of opportunities.
Secondly, it is established beyond doubt that on the one hand, some people believe that we are living a sophisticated age and studying for a long time take student's time more and they cannot start their independent life sooner, yet on the other hand, some people believe that if they study for a long time, they will find a decent job with high salary like medicine students. I strongly agree with the latter idea and I do believe that the more people study in the major obtaining more knowledge, the more they would experience enjoyable life. By way of illustration, the noteworthy intelligible results, which conducted in our country, show that approximately 90 percent of people who travel more, are ones who studied more in their major due to the fact that these people are able to earn more money which enable them to make their lives enjoyable and attractive.
To make a long story short, by considering all aforementioned reasons, one soon realizes that no one can deny the enormous positive effects of studding in a major for more years on their lives. Not only are they able to acquire more knowledge, but also they are able to experience better lives because they can earn more money. For this reason, I highly recommend that student study in a major which take more their time because it brings them several lucrative consequences like what mentioned above.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 12.0772626932 174% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 22.412803532 254% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 30.3222958057 181% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2083.0 1373.03311258 152% => OK
No of words: 441.0 270.72406181 163% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72335600907 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.04702891845 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58798812786 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 145.348785872 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469387755102 0.540411800872 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 672.3 419.366225166 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 3.25607064018 338% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 21.2450331126 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.9719647759 49.2860985944 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.785714286 110.228320801 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5 21.698381199 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06452816374 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 4.33554083885 300% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143085686837 0.272083759551 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603591390213 0.0996497079465 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0296459599513 0.0662205650399 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980734778007 0.162205337803 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173269001077 0.0443174109184 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.3589403974 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 53.8541721854 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.0289183223 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 12.2367328918 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 63.6247240618 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.498013245 137% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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