Writing Task 1 (at least 150 words)
The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site on 2024,
summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The first diagram shows the site of a school in 2004 that has 600 students, and the second diagram shows the plan for changes that has to be made to the school site in order to reach the aim of 1000 students.
if we compare both diagrams, we can see that in 2024 the school will have one more school building and one more car park. The other changes are firstly, school building one will be connected to school building two. Secondly, there will be a road that connect car park 1 with car park 2. Thirdly, the sports field will be built as school building 3, and lastly, the sports field will be lo...
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