The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features,
and make comparisons where relevant
The table provides the information about the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday.
From the table it is clear that, in overall, coffee is the most popular item, whereas tea is the least popular one. In the early morning from 7:30 to 10:30, the sales of pastries and coffee are outstanding with total sales of 275 and 265 respectively. Tea comes to the third position at this time with 110 sales, whereas sales of sandwiches are on the bottom with just 50. However, from 10:30 to 2:30, the sales of sandwiches are extraordinary with 200, whereas sales of pastrie...
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 10
No. of Words: 210 200
No. of Characters: 889 1000
No. of Different Words: 92 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.807 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.233 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.565 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 45 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 37 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 24 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 15 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.907 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.543 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.671 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.171 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4