The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph given illustrates the data concerning about the volume of goods which was transported by means of four diverse modes of transport.
From the first glance at the visuals one of the first fact to point in the former is that the amount of goods which was transported by means of ways namely: road, water and rail revealed their upward trend in 2002 whereas the line pipeline suffered from long period of stability from 1995 prior to 2002.
More precisely it can clearly be observed that the line road and water expressed their gradual increment at the beginning of the years and the l...
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Sentence: More precisely it can clearly be observed that the line road and water expressed their gradual increment at the beginning of the years and the line water continued the years with the stable rate after it had rised dramatically whilst the line road fluctuated slightly during the peroid.
Error: whilst Suggestion: while
Error: peroid Suggestion: period
Error: rised Suggestion: No alternate word
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