There are many different types of music in the world.why do we need music? is the traditional music of country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Music is one of the main parts of our life and nowadays we can΄t imagine our life without it. It really impacts our life,sometimes makes us feel sad,sometimes happy,or even can motivate us.So we can say that we need music everytime because music is the kind of entertainment and can really impress us.
there are different types of music in the world,for example classical,rock,jazz,mugam and etc.Each music type has its own specific features,and we can stress that every region or country has its own music type,to be more precise traditional music. Traditional music describes the history, lifestyle and culture of its country. For instance mugam,the traditional music of Azerbaijan has a long history and in modern world it΄s notorious and we can say for sure that there is a great interest to mugam all over the world. I think the main aim of countries is to save the traditional music and make known.
nowadays i think international music is much more popular than traditional music and to my mind it΄s the result of international ,cultural globalization. in my opinion the main cause of this is tendency is modernity. But it doesn΄t mean that we must listen to only international music and not pay attention to traditional music. if we love our country we must respect to our traditions and be proud of them.
We can ask ourselves if it΄s honest to listen more international music than traditional.i think the resolution of this problem is to make synthesis of traditional and international music. this way can help us not to forget our traditional values and enjoy both of music.
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Sentence: For instance mugam,the traditional music of Azerbaijan has a long history and in modern world its notorious and we can say for sure that there is a great interest to mugam all over the world.
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Sentence: It really impacts our life,sometimes makes us feel sad,sometimes happy,or even can motivate us.So we can say that we need music everytime because music is the kind of entertainment and can really impress us.
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