In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility.
What are your opinions on this?
Today, it is evidently noticed that public awareness regarding working child has substantially increased in comparison with a recent past. However, making money from childhood could have some side effects, it could be seen as a valid means of taking responsibility and experiencing.
A chief reason why some people are too worried about these children could root in their awareness about child labor. It is significant to separate these two connotations from each other under two conditions: first, children should be watched carefully during these kinds of activities by parents or teacher, to be ...
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