The chart below give information about the way in which water was use in different countries in 2000.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.
The figure 1 illustrates the proportion of world water use in three main sectors, agriculture, domestic and industry, in 2000. The figure 2 shows the specific patterns of water consumption in four countries in the same year.
As can be seen from the bar chart, in general, by far agriculture was the sector accounting for the highest proportion of water use, with nearly two thirds of the total (70%). It was followed by Industry making up for a relative noticeable percentage, at over a fifth of the world water use (22%). Leaving domestic sector, which was responsible for a minority of proportio...
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