In many parts of the world, families were larger in the past because people had more children. Do you think there were more advantages or disadvantages to being part of a large family in the past?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Family is an essential place where children can live, grow and continue their life. In the past, it was a common view that a family had about ten or twelve children who lived together in a house. When people talk about a family, it is likely people think of how many family members are and how the way of their life is. I think there must be some benefits to have as large as the family in the past.
In many countries, living together with more than five or ten children was a popular status in a society and a prestige for most parents in the past. Some parents thought that the more children th...
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