A person should never make an important decision alone. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
It is inevitable to take important decisions throughout our lives. Some people believe that adult people should take their own decisions without the help of others. However, from my everyday experience and observations, I strongly argue that the discussion of an important matter with others before taking a decision bring benefits.
To begin with, different people have different opinions. In order to make the right choice, people should be aware of the consequences of the decision, both positive and negative. People can share their knowledge and experiences and it enables to look the matter f...
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Score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 359 350
No. of Characters: 1829 1500
No. of Different Words: 194 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.353 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.095 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.669 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 146 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 100 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 76 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 44 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.895 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.629 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.684 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.292 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.525 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.092 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5