Write a cause and effect essay that focuses on the reasons (causes) for the food trend called “locally grown food”.
The demand for nutritious food is becoming more and more strict. Rumors are having a tendency to consume healthier food and do more exercises. Therefore, food which is locally grown has turned out to be one of the best options because of its anti-chemical feature and friendliness to the environment.
Firstly, locally grown foods are fresher than industrial ones because they are made without any interference from chemicals such as pesticides and preservatives. It can be seen that foods which are made to export always contain a large amount of preservatives to keep them at the shiny appearance or stay ripe longer. This can explain why vegetables, fruits and meats at supermarkets usually look appealing and attractive through a glance. While self-grown products seem to be more natural, they are brought to the stands right after being finished processing. People visiting farmers’ stores can even touch or taste those organic foods, and they can feel the true flavor or freshness of fruits that have just been harvested.
Secondly, purchasing and consuming local products also help protect the environment. If people can create their own farms and trade products, the number of transporting vehicles will significantly decrease. Therefore, air pollution issues may go downhill because consumers no longer need to travel to supermarkets and search for their necessary items. On the other hand, farmers having a small-scale farm can even raise small animals such as earthworms to enhance the earth's quality and productivity. Not only do they produce clean and healthy foods, they can maintain the environmental diversity.
To summarize, adapting to locally grown food is being widely supported. Choosing good foods means aiming for better living conditions, and also giving a hand to taking care of the environment. Therefore, people will raise general awareness, have higher standards for food selections, and become interested in farming.
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Suggestion: earths'; earth's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'foods'' or 'food's'?
Suggestion: foods'; food's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39672131148 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90146336412 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645901639344 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6170368634 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.875 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173357801907 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646595672822 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606394554587 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127249465668 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761354728408 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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