TPO 53 Task 1
text-align: justify;">The reading passage and the lecture are both about the evidences to affirm whether dinosaurs were endotherm animals. However, it can be stated from their contexts, that the lecture brings into question the points in the reading passage. The author of the text claims that the dinosaurs were endotherm animals. The lecturer completely refutes the arguments in the article, hence, arguing that the explanations to support this idea are faulty.
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text-align: justify;">Firstly, it is stated by the lecturer that although some dinosaurs have lived in polar areas, these areas were not too cold as today. Besides, the dinosaurs were able to migrate from these areas during the periods of inclement weather or they could hibernate to survive. this idea directly contradicts the reading passage’s claim that the fact that dinosaurs have lived in polar areas prove that they were endotherm animals.
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text-align: justify;">Secondly, the lecturer asserts that the purpose of the position of dinosaurs’ legs in the underneath part of their body is to support heavy weight. this body structure configuration is an advantage for them, but not gives them more energy for running. this idea strongly contrasts with the article that mentions that the fact that dinosaurs’ legs are not on the body’s lateral means that they were endotherm animals.
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text-align: justify;">Finally, the lecturer argues that although dinosaurs had haversian canals like endotherm animals, they also had growth treams. these structures could stop or slow growth, which can be called periodic growth, and this ability is not peculiar from endotherm animals. The text, on the other hand, states that the presence of haversian canals is an indicator that dinosaurs were endotherm animals.
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- TPO 18
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Text-align
text-align: justify;'>The reading passage and...
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Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aulty. text-align: justify;'> text-align: justify;'>Firstly, i...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...her or they could hibernate to survive. this idea directly contradicts the reading p...
^^^^
Line 7, column 31, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...imals. text-align: justify;'> text-align: justify;'>Secondly, ...
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Line 9, column 165, Rule ID: HEAVY_WEIGHT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'heavyweight'?
Suggestion: heavyweight
...rneath part of their body is to support heavy weight. this body structure configuration is a...
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Line 9, column 179, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... their body is to support heavy weight. this body structure configuration is an adva...
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Line 9, column 283, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...not gives them more energy for running. this idea strongly contrasts with the articl...
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Line 11, column 31, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...imals. text-align: justify;'> text-align: justify;'>Finally, t...
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Line 13, column 158, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...m animals, they also had growth treams. these structures could stop or slow growth, w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, as to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1373.03311258 119% => OK
No of words: 280.0 270.72406181 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.85714285714 5.08290768461 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.6778154563 2.5805825403 143% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 145.348785872 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503571428571 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 419.366225166 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9375070065 49.2860985944 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.153846154 110.228320801 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 21.698381199 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06452816374 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.09492273731 171% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0562498293605 0.272083759551 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0290272539064 0.0996497079465 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0251254599018 0.0662205650399 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.026412737898 0.162205337803 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023471647666 0.0443174109184 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.3589403974 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.8541721854 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 12.2367328918 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 63.6247240618 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.2008830022 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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