The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is widely argued that scientific research plays an integral part in promoting people’s lives. From my perspective, I totally agree with this statement on account of the development in medical care and education.
To begin with, the more alarming life-threatening diseases are, the more important science is. As a matter of fact, human beings are facing many infectious diseases caused by complicated germs and bacteria; therefore, experts and professors in medical fields have to implement a myriad of research with a view to introducing new therapies, vaccines, and antibiotics with technological innovations, which can significantly facilitate doctors’ process of diagnosis and public access to advanced medical treatments. Take cancer as a typical example. Such a fatal disease nowadays is gradually solved thanks to the advent of chemical treatment. As a result, the overall well-being and average life expectancy of citizens will be improved.
Another contributing factor is that educators have to conduct scientific research to keep up with educational development. Not only can teaching methodologies be renovated but learning strategies of learners will also be positively changed with the advent of science. Should fundamental knowledge such as natural and social science be promoted, individuals can develop their life-long learning and personal growth. Language education is a clear justification. In particular, breakthroughs on applied linguistic sciences and teaching methodologies have led to technological integration and various effective methods and approaches such as Communicative Language Teaching, Task-based learning, and Grammar Translation, so the process of teaching and language learning become surprisingly effective.
In conclusion, were people not to conduct scientific research, there would be no improvement and development of any academic fields in our lives. Therefore, it seems to me that both governments and citizens should invest time and money in science to ensure a better future for young generations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
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Message: The verb 'can' requires base form of the verb: 'teach'.
Suggestion: teach
...h educational development. Not only can teaching methodologies be renovated but learning...
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Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...urprisingly effective. In conclusion, were people not to conduct scientific resear...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.872909699 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31658600555 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642140468227 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 102.068029535 49.4020404114 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 125.428571429 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19175243144 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583808297085 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446035242888 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113106020697 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016683422262 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.77 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.7 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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