Do you agree or diasgree with: "There is nothing that an uneducated person can teach an educated person" ? Include details and examples to support your answer.
Education seems to be of utmost importance to today's youngsters. But its sheen has been lost since the good olden days. Days are gone, when a person with a degree, was granted a job. Now-a-days companies prefer candidates who are fit to work with their practical knowledge. Thus, education has become secondary. I firmly disagree with the claim that there is nothing that an uneducated person can teach an educated person.
First of all, uneducated people tend to more loving and affable. They do understand human relationships far better than the educate...
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