People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment - doing things they like to do - rather than doing things they should do.
I completely agree with the statement that people today spend most of their time on personal enjoyment in doing things they like rather than doing things they are assigned to. In this modernized world, technology has developed by leaps and bounds, and there is umpteen number of ways for people of all age to get distracted. It can turn out either to be constructive or destructive for their career. However, it is the natural tendency of people to indulge in doing things they like, the most.
First of all, this character of spending too much time on personal enjoyment...
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