(CHEVENING SCHOLARSHIP) Your career plan and benefit to your home country: Describe your immediate plans upon completion of your Chevening award. You should explain your longer-term (5-10 year) career objectives and describe how your time in the UK will help you achieve these. You should also discuss how a Chevening award would benefit you and your home country.
Max 300 words
As we probably know together, to study aboard in United Kingdom particularly may initially cost a great deal of money. I could not make my dream become real without fund. Because of live in developing country is hard enough to make education becoming number one priority. So that, Chevening program is more likely help me to continue my study in master degree.
By completing my master degree in United Kingdom, it will surely provide me an opportunity of experiencing a research-active learning environment that will give me excellent grounding in the study of Foreign policy or governance and democracy. Pursuing master degree in United Kingdom from Chevening programme would be such an invaluable experience since I would be able to comprehend the issue of international relations, governance and democracy as the processes involved in dealing with them.
After finishing my master degree, I would like to devote myself to my country in field of foreign policy and democracy. As far as I am concerned, foreign policy and democracy are always interesting to be analyzed since my country, Indonesia, use democracy approach after we had a reformation era in 1998. Furthermore, I also wish to get involved in a policy-development role in my country through my basis on academic field. I strongly believe that taking master degree in United Kingdom would provide me with the best preparation to embark my career afterwards.
Because of live in developing country is hard enough
Because living in developing countries is hard enough
is more likely help me
is more likely to help me
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No. of Words: 231 350
Minimum 250 words wanted
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 15
No. of Words: 231 350
No. of Characters: 1170 1500
No. of Different Words: 135 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.899 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.065 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.035 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 97 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 68 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 49 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.1 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.803 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.3 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.437 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.614 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.185 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5