Discuss your current involvement in community service projects and volunteer activities. Describe what you have learned about yourself as a result of these activities. (250 words or less)
When we think about community service it may seem like complete altruistic acts for the sake of the community, however, a person who commits these acts receives no less. Volunteering activities make an impact on volunteer’s personality by leading to the advancement of new skills, and exploration of hidden ones in the work process.
I have been involved in volunteering for 2 years and this experience not only helped to gain new skills such as time management, organization, and planning but also made me realize features of my character, which I didn’t notice before. First of all, dedication to work was seen from the very first day of the volunteer activity. Therefore, when it comes to the execution of tasks I always try to do my best and complete it on the top-level; moreover, I cannot stand to be free and inefficient when there is work to do. In addition to the dedication, during the work process, I learned about my ability to communicate as I was required to interact with volunteers and numerous people of different ages and personalities. Last but not least, throughout the work with a plethora of personalities I faced kinds of obstacles, so stress tolerance flashed. This trait helped me to stay balanced and complete given tasks with excellence.
To conclude, community service made an impact on my becoming who I am now by assisting in the determination of such skills like dedication, communication, and tolerance to stress.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00823045267 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17262866721 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609053497942 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.0308544833 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.222222222 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5555555556 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110398795011 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415759421848 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036397925741 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763584198798 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302836218693 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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