NURTURING AND REWARDING ALL MEMBERS TO BUILD A HEALTHY SOCIETY
Society does not grow alone rather the growth of all members of a society makes it a healthy society. Society is defined as a body of people tied together and involved with each other through persistent relationships, usually sharing a common geographical territory, subject to the same governmental authorities, with compatible dominant cultural influences and expectations. A healthy society enables its members collectively and individually to benefit in ways that would not otherwise be possible. Society provides us with the platform to work together for the betterment of the members as a whole. The advancement of the society and the improvement in our living standard is only possible due to the collective effort of every individual in a society.
A healthy society demands the nurturing and rewarding its members irrespective of their intelligence level, fields of contribution and their status in a society. Dale Carnegi also emphasized to give honest and sincere appreciation along with proper reward as a fundamental technique in handling people. Rewarding is one of the most powerful tools to bring out the maximum potential of a person which ultimately contribute to building a healthy society. If the society can make every member feel important then they will aspire to contribute more to making the society a healthy one. Therefore, it is imperative to nurture and reward all members to build a healthy society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 454, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ntribute to building a healthy society. If the society can make every member feel ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3127753304 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08272482994 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581497797357 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4397613263 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.6 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.506762546093 0.244688304435 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209924797755 0.084324248473 249% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.167291825999 0.0667982634062 250% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.383931291292 0.151304729494 254% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119851736586 0.056905535591 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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