A post on Facebook asking for an arrangement
Hello everyone, my name is Gem. I am now preparing for my upcoming IELTS test which is on the 5th of January.
I am an international student in the UK looking for a speaking partner whom I can practice a range of topics with. I am currently at band 7 and aiming for 7.5. Since I mostly do private study, exam techniques and a grounded understanding of exam structure are my priority.
Hopefully, in this way, we can learn from each other and improve together, reaping from this journey to achieve the best out of our IELTS test.
Over this period, I am free from 7 pm to 10 pm every day (according to Vietnamese timezone).
If you would like to arrange at a different time, please message me for further discussion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 116, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... I can practice a range of topics with. I am currently at band 7 and aiming for 7...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 594.0 1615.20841683 37% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 132.0 315.596192385 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38956122427 4.20363070211 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74836122805 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 176.041082164 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.712121212121 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 184.5 506.74238477 36% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2131797918 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8571428571 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.14285714286 7.06120827912 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119443963519 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522132458452 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052422467218 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0585543389713 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544088823898 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 78.4519038076 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.33 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.