Recent advances in technology leads the fact that human workforce is gradually replaced with machinery.
What are some problems caused by this trend, and how could they be dealt with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
It is undeniable that technology brings many benefits for people especially reducing the human workforce significantly. However, there are some problems which can cause by this trend and people need to tackle this situation soon.
First of all, machinery is used too much in every field that it can lead to a bad effect on human's creativity. Machinery is set automatically to produce products soothingly so they have not the breakthrough in operating. Therefore, people would become lazy and lack of creativity to make new or elaborate goods. Moreover, technology also causes pollution, in particular for air and water. Many manufacturers and factories utilize too many machines would result in environmental pollution and this harms people's health such as cancer or skin diseases. Besides, the noise from machinery also causes annoyance for people who live surrounding that places.
To solve these problems, the government should have limited policies about the amount of machinery which are used in each factory. Out of this, officials also had better encourage companies should use both human resources and machinery properly, especially they have the useful training courses to enhance employees competence and make creative products. Furthermore, people can deal with this issue by using environmentally friendly materials in the production process. This solution not only protects the environment but also makes sustainable development in the future. Workers had better improve skills and have an appropriate perception about making use of machines in producing. They should not depend on them and need to explore creative things which only people can think about without the need to support from machinery.
In conclusion, for the above-mentioned reasons I am firmly conviction that advances in technology also cause several problems that people need to recognize and resolve these issues to develop the economy and society appropriately.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, in particular, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57382550336 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94489616197 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614093959732 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2201599051 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.733333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173043471193 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607961356017 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422256149234 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119734237293 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036110824264 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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