Your company wants to allow some employees to work from home. Not everyone can have this choice because some jobs must be done at the office. The company wants to know if this is fair by surveying your opinion about working from home.
Choose the option that you prefer. Why do you prefer your choice? Explain the reasons for your choice.
Option A: A work-from-home choice is fair.
Option B: A work-from-home choice is not fair.
Although both options have advantages and I can see why some colleagues might prefer Option B, if I had to make a choice, I would choose Option A, work-from-home choice is fair, for several reasons.
First of all, what makes it a better choice is that should some employees have the opportunity to work from home, consequently company expenses such as those paid for energy and utility consumption could be decreased noticeably. Regrading present economical circumstances in which many companies are becoming closed, this would contribute to the sustainability of the company providing us with the chance to have a job for a longer time.
Secondly, working from home would be definitely fair in the light of the fact that we are required to accept our jobs' limitation. For instance, there are those doctors who have to work having to accept different risks at their works or there are drivers driving trucks who could not visit their families for several weeks.
Taking into account above-mentioned justifications, I wholeheartedly believe that Option A stating that allowing some employees to work from home is fair, seems to be a better choice.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to option'
Suggestion: To option
... I had to make a choice, I would choose Option A, work-from-home choice is fair, for s...
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Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...decreased noticeably. Regrading present economical circumstances in which many companies a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 1615.20841683 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 189.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12698412698 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97740245752 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656084656085 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 506.74238477 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.5650490303 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.5 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5 7.06120827912 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388088909385 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191002430615 0.084324248473 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625369488253 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235462100212 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334108032283 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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