In the 18th century due to industrialization a lot of people migrated to developed countries. This affected lifestyle and increased major problems in developed countries. Discuss the problems and solutions to overcome these problems.
Recently, the phenomenon of migration to developed countries due to industrialization and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that affecting lifestyle is highly beneficial, such issues are regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that being industrialized can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From developed countries scientists standpoint, immigrant people can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that the development of countries, as well as industry booming, are inextricably bound up. According to my own experience, when I was a univesrsity student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered migration benefits. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both immigrant communities and industrial developments apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of socialist, migration might increase the consequences of food problems. Moreover, the fundamental aspects of major problems, relate to this reality that the demerits of modern lifestyle pertian to new method of migration. As a tangible example, a scientific research was undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of migrating to developed countries is correlated negatively with violence problems. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of migration.
To conclude, while there are several compellling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of migrationfar outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of developed countries prove the significance of migration issues, but also pinpoint the immigration implications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.94444444444 5.00649968141 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44993527678 2.71678728327 127% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654761904762 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8717307692 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.833333333 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254170802046 0.242375264174 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774212956564 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052212653214 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131446710655 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432285087117 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 53.1260098522 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.17 11.5310837438 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.19 8.32886699507 134% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 55.0591133005 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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