Advantages and disadvantages of co-education.

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Advantages and disadvantages of co-education.

There has been a colossal upsurge when it comes to pen down the advantages and disadvantages of co-education. In this essay, I will try to discuss the facts for both the sides of the coin.

I have a myriad of facts in favor of my instance. Firstly, people are very much enthusiastic about education these days.No one wants to be on the back bench when it comes to pursuing quality education. One of the conspicuous trend these days are about the education system. One one hand, there are schools where only boys are allowed to enroll and on the other hand, there are schools where only girls are allowed to study. Along with these two systems, there is one more type of school where both the girls and boys are allowed to study and it is called as co-education.

Parents are often worried about the systems, as some think that if the same gender is studying together then they will be more comfortable. There are parents who are not well versed with modern society and they still have the modesty and not prefer the co-education. The side we are discussing is that there are more advantages of co-education. When boys and girls study together, it is not just the study they pursue, they also learn the human behavior for another gender. Boys open much and talk about the upliftment of the less confident girls.

Secondly, the other fact is that after schools when they pursue graduation, it becomes easier for both genders to communicate better. Also, in the next phase of life, when they start their career, they have to work with mix genders and then the benefit of co-education comes handy.

From the above facts, one can conclude that the benefits of co-education are too great to be ignored and it is very beneficial for the society to encourage the education system with co-education pattern.

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Average: 6.5 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: No
...enthusiastic about education these days.No one wants to be on the back bench when ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: One
...se days are about the education system. One one hand, there are schools where only boys...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, well, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 10.5418719212 228% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 316.0 242.827586207 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73101265823 5.00649968141 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50108732964 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490506329114 0.580463131201 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1142811921 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230066175003 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934040848079 0.0925447433944 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146590686585 0.071462118173 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141933599473 0.151781067708 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100948932149 0.0609392437508 166% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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