Employers /Authorities of a company should take suggestions or ideas from employees in taking any decision. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is involving employees in the decision-making process by a number of organizations, be it big or small. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of problems in any company. In my opinion, this apprehension is unwarranted and so should be rejected.
There are a deluge of arguments in favor of my stance. The most preponderant one is that thanks to the input from employees, employers will have diverse ideas and concepts to work on. Not only can the company come to a much wiser decision based on the data, but they can also make the staff feel privileged by considering their opinion important. Needless to say, all these merits stand any business in good stead, as far as increasing its productivity is concerned.
Another pivotal aspect of involving the employees in strategic planning of the organization is that they will not feel like they are merely following orders; they will rather feel that they are an indispensable part of the organization, which will motivate them to put in more efforts. Unlike those companies which impose orders on their employees and so fail to generate spontaneity among them, companies that value their employees’ opinion succeed in motivating them to work spontaneously. Apparently the latter benefit more when it comes to productivity.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefits which considering employees’ advice and suggestion offers in a company are indeed too great to ignore.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'deluges'?
Suggestion: deluges
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12204724409 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1206568182 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594488188976 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.6866361276 50.4703680194 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.272727273 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 7.25397266985 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115899963569 0.242375264174 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039966780636 0.0925447433944 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320325144778 0.071462118173 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0697283617286 0.151781067708 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0122185756384 0.0609392437508 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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