Advantages and disadvantages of invention
Technology plays an essential role in the wellbeing of an individual and society. A new invention is nothing but a discovery, which makes our lives easier. The issue of whether a new invention will bring advantages or disadvantages has sparked a heated debate. While some argue that a new invention will bring disadvantages, I think that a new invention is better for our lives. In this essay, I will put forward my point of view by analysing both sides of arguments.
To begin with, a new invention saves our time. To cite an example, according to a recent survey done by the Stanford University, 85% of the people benefitted from a new invention, whereas 15% of people faced disadvantages due to it. They improved their existing scenarios extraordinarily, and that paved the way for a better economic future.
Those who assert that a new invention will bring disadvantages come forward with the traditional way of thinking. To illustrate, they showcased the recent article in 'The Time of India' newspaper, which published that 10% of people want to live without any invention. But this illustration does not give full support to their argument.
To conclude, while there are strong arguments on both sides of the case. I suggest that new inventions are beneficial in this technological world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, well, whereas, while, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1087.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 216.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03240740741 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03138235431 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597222222222 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2457098053 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6153846154 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6153846154 20.9669160288 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 7.25397266985 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260509584 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906635882944 0.0925447433944 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112205206786 0.071462118173 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145177678052 0.151781067708 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730273356383 0.0609392437508 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 12.6369458128 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.5310837438 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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