Advantages & Disadvantages of Cashless Society.

Essay topics:

Advantages & Disadvantages of Cashless Society.

It has been observed that many countries are transforming towards cashless. This essay will discuss firstly, how going to cashless make people life hassle free and then discuss the negative effects of it.

By having an environment with complete automated payment systems will make citizens life stressless. This cashless place will let people perform smoother transactions as they no longer need to carry raw money in their wallets. Apart from this benefit, the transactions can be paid with the exact amount of money without losing any additional cents by not carrying exact change. When I visited Singapore earlier this year, I was fascinated by their way of dealing money transactions using cards and felt so much relaxed there was no need to carry a huge amount of money everywhere.

However, on the other side of the coin, switching to autopay methods also have ramifications. This process must be supported with a sophisticated security system to ensure both buyer and seller not to lose a single penny at any cost. A small security glitch in the system could make the whole country to go bankrupt. For instance, The New York Times reported earlier this year that there were about 2 million cyber attacks occurred in the last year and approximately USD 5 Billion was stolen with a myriad of credentials were compromised.

In conclusion, the benefits, such as having a stressfree life by dealing with online or cards, must be outweighed the negatives, such as secure infrastructure. Overall, the advantages of going cashless outweigh the disadvantages because card or online transactions always have complex security algorithms to break.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 267.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1872659176 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84597867312 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644194756554 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4018688794 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.416666667 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.25397266985 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0816694549443 0.242375264174 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347476305316 0.0925447433944 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616209926233 0.071462118173 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.059714656598 0.151781067708 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509978497772 0.0609392437508 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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